| Content Description | Discusses an essay by her, both in terms of content and her literary style in general; criticises her conclusions about the artistic subject; refers to characteristics in her style, also evident in letters to 'J.' [Jessie Chambers] which he has read, and recommends some changes; refers to his own work, and explains why 'Miss B.' [Edith Mary Becket] found it confused; adds that he enjoyed her work and that he thinks she will do well, exceeding himself; describes her as brighter, though less powerful than Jessie, and less wilful than himself.
Dated by Louie Burrows in her own transcript; see La B 243. |